while with his gun the pagan angel rose to say

I have to say, if this (incest) were really to have happened between Sam and Dean, your fic is probably the closest to believable that I've seen.

It really felt like missing scenes from the flashbacks in "After School Special". They thoughts, the attitudes, the words - they all fit with how young Dean and Sammy behaved in that episode.

There's so much I want to say about this fic, but I can't even gather my thoughts clearly enough right now. I'm just blown away by how well you nailed the characterization (plus, you made it really hot, too).

Thanks for sharing!!